It was all angles once,
jagged edges,
quick to cut,
like a teenage girl
off to college
certain of her certainties
and disdainful
of careless handling.
But rivers are inexorable,
submitting all
to the rough and tumble;
the thunder of falls
and the swirling of eddies.
What emerges
is a softer thing,
still strong,
but now gentle, too.
Author's Note: I picked up this piece of old tile along the Quechee River in Vermont.
This is a Sunday Scribblings post.
8 comments:
Chuck all the girls in the river to sort them out? I didn't quite expect that of you. What would you do to us mere males?
April 7, 2013 at 2:31 AMAge softens the edges..sometimes along with the certainties..but if they are replaced by the right questions..that is as brilliant as finding a beautiful stone..
April 7, 2013 at 9:08 AMBlunted edges? The edges of your prose are not blunted...
April 7, 2013 at 11:31 AMyou write poetry very good (well). I like the way to liken the sofening of life to the tumbling of a stone
April 7, 2013 at 11:44 AMabsolutely, life knocks us about and forms us perfectly into things of beauty to be treasured.
April 7, 2013 at 12:33 PMNice analogy :)
April 7, 2013 at 3:29 PMI like the softer things, but sometimes edges are nice. I kind of miss mine.
April 8, 2013 at 11:40 PMThis wonderful, fantastic analogy.
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