tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.comments2023-04-15T09:56:07.099-05:00Ann Pino<p>Fiction Writer</p>Ann (bunnygirl)http://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comBlogger2160125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-45343847688138600872018-04-23T20:27:05.789-05:002018-04-23T20:27:05.789-05:00That's a really clear generational demarcation...That's a really clear generational demarcation in a ruined world.Alice Audreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00493000223984649409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-57675194473561180082018-04-16T05:13:15.160-05:002018-04-16T05:13:15.160-05:00I enjoyed this and found the way you showed the in...I enjoyed this and found the way you showed the inevitable disparity in thinking between generations brilliantMichael Wynnhttps://michaelwynnauthor.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-77257186621866636072018-04-14T19:13:08.747-05:002018-04-14T19:13:08.747-05:00The perspective of a happy child. How refreshing!...The perspective of a happy child. How refreshing!Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12838088100679305391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-73809369277876937502018-04-13T12:22:35.394-05:002018-04-13T12:22:35.394-05:00I love how you contrast the perception of father a...I love how you contrast the perception of father and daughter. To me it reads like the beginning of a dystopian SciFi story with a lot of hope for the futureGah Learnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14026806223157421535noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-82708884056597484022018-04-13T10:29:46.294-05:002018-04-13T10:29:46.294-05:00There's much more to this story than I first r...There's much more to this story than I first realised. The last line was a very wise conclusion to draw.Penny Gaddhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12139119721556370510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-49688567259673808222018-04-13T05:53:47.042-05:002018-04-13T05:53:47.042-05:00I enjoyed reading this - you captured the two pers...I enjoyed reading this - you captured the two perspectives really well.<br /><br />Susan A Eames at<br /><a href="http://susan-a-eamestravelfictionandphotos.blogspot.ie" rel="nofollow">Travel, Fiction and Photos</a><br />Susan A Eameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06216267529948378488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-33985377902723077512018-04-12T19:21:49.547-05:002018-04-12T19:21:49.547-05:00Wonderfully written story showing the differences ...Wonderfully written story showing the differences between living long and being newer to the world.lisarey1990@gmail.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12623626767963831246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-28343281447826873732018-04-12T11:30:53.054-05:002018-04-12T11:30:53.054-05:00And that, everywhere, is the point of young people...And that, everywhere, is the point of young peopleAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-6300908267625277632018-04-12T09:23:46.231-05:002018-04-12T09:23:46.231-05:00Interesting observations. Interesting observations. Sandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-55841354638967453272018-03-27T18:05:18.493-05:002018-03-27T18:05:18.493-05:00oooooo I want to know the rest of Sophie's exp...oooooo I want to know the rest of Sophie's exploration story!Sascha Darlingtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10341908377333394733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-48361469660363449922018-03-25T12:15:19.205-05:002018-03-25T12:15:19.205-05:00It's always tempting... but I recommend cautio...It's always tempting... but I recommend caution... brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-29024202988199794982018-03-24T23:16:40.056-05:002018-03-24T23:16:40.056-05:00Great story. The heroine is very likeable.Great story. The heroine is very likeable.lisarey1990@gmail.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12623626767963831246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-23681713489667778042018-03-23T20:21:19.865-05:002018-03-23T20:21:19.865-05:00Kindred spirits this week :) Nicely done. Kindred spirits this week :) Nicely done. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12838088100679305391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-43848225705590999372018-03-23T17:22:56.590-05:002018-03-23T17:22:56.590-05:00Intriguing. Will have to read your serial Valley o...Intriguing. Will have to read your serial Valley of Ashes to find out what she finds around the bend.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05806564703785724033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-44432225635685649552018-03-23T06:32:24.902-05:002018-03-23T06:32:24.902-05:00You've left me wondering...!Nice one Ann.
Cli...You've left me wondering...!Nice one Ann.<br /><br /><a href="https://keithsramblings.net/2018/03/21/100-words/" rel="nofollow">Click to read my 100 Word Story!</a><br /><br />Keith's Ramblingshttp://keithsramblings.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-84915767949080112932018-03-22T16:06:59.589-05:002018-03-22T16:06:59.589-05:00At last! A heroine who is brave enough to continue...At last! A heroine who is brave enough to continue but does so with due caution. What is she seeking so tenaciously, I wonder?Penny Gaddhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12139119721556370510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-53339720050406472942018-03-22T12:42:28.862-05:002018-03-22T12:42:28.862-05:00I love the way you link it to the longer work. Th...I love the way you link it to the longer work. This could be from her ride in Chapter 8.Alice Audreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00493000223984649409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-52978935183502372792018-03-21T18:05:07.859-05:002018-03-21T18:05:07.859-05:00She's not easily dissuaded.She's not easily dissuaded.Iain Kellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08985628484548823345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-51474804916043276732018-03-12T16:58:56.206-05:002018-03-12T16:58:56.206-05:00Compelling.Compelling.Colonialisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07557767445598681641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-47895940392490616392018-03-11T10:35:56.588-05:002018-03-11T10:35:56.588-05:00A powerful story - I am glad she has a hand to hol...A powerful story - I am glad she has a hand to hold and that she will stand up against her father Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-433126221428584382018-03-05T11:17:32.936-06:002018-03-05T11:17:32.936-06:00Great loophole. :)Great loophole. :)Alice Audreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00493000223984649409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-14162649217798584052018-03-05T02:06:10.701-06:002018-03-05T02:06:10.701-06:00An entrepreneur in the making! Delightful.An entrepreneur in the making! Delightful.Keith's Ramblingshttp://keithsramblings.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-59410748966597647302018-03-04T14:07:05.830-06:002018-03-04T14:07:05.830-06:00Sweet story, I see a lifelong friendship.Sweet story, I see a lifelong friendship.Iain Kellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08985628484548823345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-43999132385823313692018-03-04T13:26:44.287-06:002018-03-04T13:26:44.287-06:00The real boss may have something to say about this...The real boss may have something to say about this.Jameshttps://poweredbyrobots.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-53071342428504483042018-03-04T11:30:23.215-06:002018-03-04T11:30:23.215-06:00The ladies always get their way, regardless of age...The ladies always get their way, regardless of age!C. E. Ayrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08282147805843608053noreply@blogger.com