Could I have you for a moment?
Alone.
Just you,
without the sugar frosting,
candy coating,
fake confection outer layer,
so sweet
and so unlike what's inside:
messy,
prickly,
complicated,
sometimes wrong
and often hard to deal with,
but always
real.
I would only need a minute,
plastic wrapping shredded
on the floor,
beside the masks and feathers,
colored spangles,
cellophane,
and all the other
little things
that make you
easy to like,
hard to know,
despicable caricature
of an honest man.
I only want to hear one word,
genuine,
unscripted,
even if it's hateful,
hurtful,
angry,
full of pain.
Pain is real,
and if you feel life's sting
through foam padding
and phony smiles,
then maybe you can feel
this one thing, too:
my touch upon your hand,
reassurance
that somewhere on the inside,
in this moment,
in this moment,
10 comments:
so many of us hid that place and never peel the outside off. Nice writing
March 2, 2013 at 10:55 PMIt is a great poem...but I think you are asking just a little too much. If he is like that on the outside by the time you have peeled off of those those layers, like an onion, all that will be left is the smell.
March 2, 2013 at 11:09 PMLove this poem, the way it flows, the honesty and the heart felt plea. Well Done
March 3, 2013 at 3:11 AMeasy to like..hard to know..that line sang out..a moment of reality is worth ripping off the cellophane for..
March 3, 2013 at 4:57 AMYou never know. Perhaps his perception is vice versa! Just a thought.
March 3, 2013 at 7:11 AMOh, Ann... what happens when the despicable human can't feel the touch?
March 3, 2013 at 7:52 AMYou nailed it again, of course.
I only hope you are right. After all a leopard can't change its spots
March 3, 2013 at 9:46 AMJust you, without the sugar frosting. Nicely done...
March 3, 2013 at 1:09 PMthis says so much that we could all do with healing and following
March 4, 2013 at 5:57 AMFor some people, the real isn't so important. Then finding what's real can become impossible, no matter how much is peeled away.
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