Silent feet,
busy mind,
alert to tiny clues;
the steady drip of
life-fluid:
wounded prey
Gather this bitter harvest.
We are here to catch a mouse
or perhaps a rat.
Scurryings in secret places,
whisper of a scent.
No more waiting by the door
for scraps,
perfunctory caresses,
handouts.
We are engaged in epic battle.
Quietly.
Where will we go next?
There is no place to hide.
11 comments:
LOL. well done
December 5, 2012 at 10:03 AMQuiet battles on busy feet are the worst..trapped on that mouse wheel..we all need a bell..to stop!
December 5, 2012 at 11:11 AMFine little story, well told. Never - ever - forget to bell the cat.
December 5, 2012 at 2:24 PMpurrfectly penned. this poem has a sense of quiet suspense.
December 5, 2012 at 5:05 PMIt is funny that as I read this aloud I whispered to make sure neither the cat nor I was seen or heard. A great laugh.
December 5, 2012 at 5:28 PMThe secret to belling the cat is a VERY HEAVY BELL!
December 6, 2012 at 2:36 AMWhat a great poem. I could really picture the cat. :)
December 6, 2012 at 6:49 AMhttp://otherworlddiner.blogspot.com/2012/12/a-blazing-hot-keyboard-50000-word-novel.html
Bitter harvest? :D
December 6, 2012 at 9:22 AMYou remind me a little too well that one of my cats is a birder. She frequently brings parts into the house and expects us to be all excited about it then gets put out when we throw it away.
@Alice: I wasn't thinking about real cats and real rats when I wrote this.
December 6, 2012 at 9:28 AMWell that doesn't end well for all.
December 7, 2012 at 9:19 PMI certainly reminds me of real cats and real rats.
December 7, 2012 at 11:13 PMReal bells, too.
Cheers!
JzB
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