(Novel and Short Stories)
Eerie and intriguing. Others relationships are intriguing (mine no less so).
This is a weighty silence..i like the use of brackets..like a split in the voice...sometimes collusion can make you feel belonging..other times perhaps it sets you (uncomfortably) apart..
wondering what happened to force the silence!
Yep, you've done it again, woman. This is my struggle, too -- only, I'm tired of protecting someone who relies on that protection to continue to be reprehensible.
Interesting conflict between trust, honour and betrayal!
Lies to destroy and lies to protect... oh what a tangled web... beautifully woven!
There is a conspiracy of silence which can break one's resolve if it's for the wrong reasons. Your poem has a hint of "omission" in it, and it was very intriguing. Thanks, Ann. Peace, Amyhttp://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/11/19/bitter-silence/
Who are they? What secrets? Such a mystery.
Silence can be a painful thing - well written this.
I'd spill the beans on the jerk for (whispering little lies)! lol
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2009 ·Ann PinoFiction Writer by TNB