He paused while putting her suitcase in the car. “We still have a little gasoline and there’s plenty to eat. To future generations, we’re rich.”
She glanced around the weed-choked parking lot. That this shabby existence might be a Golden Age was too much to bear. “Let’s go. We need to make Albuquerque by noon.”
About Friday Flash 55: The challenge is to write a complete story in fifty-five words or less. If you've written a 55-flash, go let The G-Man know!
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5 comments:
nice...sends the mind a spinning and leaves me wanting more...nice 55
October 14, 2011 at 3:16 PMDoes leave one wanting more, but sometimes it's best left that way.
October 14, 2011 at 4:05 PMAnn....
October 14, 2011 at 4:20 PMHi, and welcome to the Friday Funfest.
Great job on your story, but the challenge is to write one using EXACTLY 55 words!!
You are forgiven this week...:P
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
@G-Man: I could've sworn it was 55, but I must've deleted something after the last time I checked the word count. The problem is duly corrected.
October 14, 2011 at 5:09 PMYipe! I don't even check my word count anymore. I just try to get close.
October 14, 2011 at 10:42 PMHey, this looks like a good lead in to the Diana stories.
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