I would be a blank slate,
stripped of memory,
(stripped of you)
my thoughts wiped clean
with
a little discernment.
Rid of recollection,
no need to fear
the sticks and stones
that break my bones
break my heart
break my mind;
remembrances that polarize
and become identity
all too soon
(not soon enough)
Perhaps I'll cast my lot with
sinners
or selflessly side with angels.
More likely I'll put a posey in my
pocket,
clench a clover in my fist,
and hope for the best.
So take me to the river of forgetting.
Build the bonfire high.
Tonight I'll cast remembrance
to the flames,
to the flames,
and after mark my face
12 comments:
With the opening stanza I thought you were heading down the Alzheimer's line.
September 28, 2014 at 1:25 AMI wonder how many of us will relate to your words which describe that dreadful loneliness of lost love. Curiously having experienced it the value of true love is enhanced many times.
September 28, 2014 at 1:50 AMI love that posy of clover in your pocket...part of the ritual of cleansing all things bad...i wonder if a mind can truly ever be wiped clean...even if the mind forgets the body still remembers..i really got caught caught up in the flow..like I was silently chanting a wish with the narrator...for something better
September 28, 2014 at 3:44 AMA lovely poem, the words today lent themselves to wistfulness.
September 28, 2014 at 5:00 AMYour final stanza wraps it up with familiarity and a ritual for letting go. Well-penned.
September 28, 2014 at 8:23 AMI liked it! No I think our memories are always with us, we may think we have forgotten, but they pop up when least expected....one wonders where they have been hiding to return so real!
September 28, 2014 at 9:35 AMI like the sound, the beat, of your poem. I read it aloud a couple of times. It reads very nicely. Good job. Randy
September 28, 2014 at 2:00 PMLast stanza is just prefect and the rest is beautifully done.
September 28, 2014 at 3:51 PMA remarkable expression of our we if allow our experiences to affect our mind they may shape who we become.
September 28, 2014 at 7:12 PMNicely done, Ann. Full of whismy.
September 28, 2014 at 10:45 PMPamela
Sounds like some bridge burning going on, but at least a blank slate will let you move in a new direction.
September 30, 2014 at 12:26 AMI especially liked the line about casting remembrance to the flames.
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