I won’t make this a morality tale,
though I’ve seen the lies,
felt the deception,
all smoothed over
with smiles.
with smiles.
You’ve fed the evidence of disaster
to the fire,
burned it to ash
like your soul.
like your soul.
Better that you had given
your fairy tales
your fairy tales
to the flames, instead.
You can bury the truth,
but it will sprout again in Spring.
Have no fear
that I will reveal your secrets.
that I will reveal your secrets.
(Secrets have their own ways.)
But though I do not raise the hue and cry,
accuse, pull off your mask,
I know what lies beneath.
And in the wickedest arcane corners of my heart,
Je suis d'accord.
Je suis d'accord.
This is a Three Word Wednesday post.
7 comments:
wow powerful I love this
May 7, 2014 at 11:10 AMNow you set our imaginings loose and we conjure up scenarios for this intriguing piece. I think the narrator is as evil as the subject!
May 7, 2014 at 5:55 PMNo matter how the truth is hidden, it will be revealed eventually. This is a strong write.
May 7, 2014 at 6:28 PMWow. What a compelling poem--all about secrets. If this was a story I'd read on to discover what was hidden and how it came out.
May 8, 2014 at 6:22 AMhttp://otherworlddiner.blogspot.com/2014/05/i-read-you-read-everybody-reads-books_8.html
There is a great sense of knowing and measure in this piece..i think your choice of end is far more powerful than j'accuse could ever be..
May 8, 2014 at 8:32 AMI had to run the last line through Google Translate to be sure that it really did say "I agree" because I have no formal French in my background, but it definitely adds power to the piece. Excellent!
May 8, 2014 at 10:49 AMSo much I can identify with in this powerful write! Great job!
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