tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post1505204778867925858..comments2023-04-15T09:56:07.099-05:00Comments on Ann Pino<p>Fiction Writer</p>: Morality TaleAnn (bunnygirl)http://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-25937499575682660022014-05-10T13:19:12.148-05:002014-05-10T13:19:12.148-05:00So much I can identify with in this powerful write...So much I can identify with in this powerful write! Great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-79116265351197113752014-05-08T10:49:44.950-05:002014-05-08T10:49:44.950-05:00I had to run the last line through Google Translat...I had to run the last line through Google Translate to be sure that it really did say "I agree" because I have no formal French in my background, but it definitely adds power to the piece. Excellent!Alice Audreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00493000223984649409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-10681645854272318332014-05-08T08:32:56.031-05:002014-05-08T08:32:56.031-05:00There is a great sense of knowing and measure in t...There is a great sense of knowing and measure in this piece..i think your choice of end is far more powerful than j'accuse could ever be..Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-2255768792419297822014-05-08T06:22:18.450-05:002014-05-08T06:22:18.450-05:00Wow. What a compelling poem--all about secrets. If...Wow. What a compelling poem--all about secrets. If this was a story I'd read on to discover what was hidden and how it came out.<br /><br />http://otherworlddiner.blogspot.com/2014/05/i-read-you-read-everybody-reads-books_8.htmlMia Celestehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08961508590395855772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-67453858629603317092014-05-07T18:28:14.659-05:002014-05-07T18:28:14.659-05:00No matter how the truth is hidden, it will be reve...No matter how the truth is hidden, it will be revealed eventually. This is a strong write.Belva Rae Stapleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16018806071465719524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-69637926209405322892014-05-07T17:55:42.358-05:002014-05-07T17:55:42.358-05:00Now you set our imaginings loose and we conjure up...Now you set our imaginings loose and we conjure up scenarios for this intriguing piece. I think the narrator is as evil as the subject!Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-11946968187981418052014-05-07T11:10:57.549-05:002014-05-07T11:10:57.549-05:00wow powerful I love thiswow powerful I love thisSheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.com