You would pay me
in the same coin
as the others:
vacuous words,
meaningless,
mendacious,
manipulative,
as short on truth
as they are sumptuous
in praise
and empty flattery.
Whether I be
sassy and vivacious,
or solemn and mundane,
your language is the same,
as if I were:
automaton,
automaton,
everygirl,
just another double-x
to swoon at generic promises
slathered on
without regard
to what is real.
Oh, master of shopworn formula,
I reject your payment.
And you, with singular charm,
deflect all efforts
at barter.
I doubt you'll reconsider,
but if
And you, with singular charm,
deflect all efforts
at barter.
I doubt you'll reconsider,
but if
on some violet evening,
you have a change of heart,
please ask me who I am.
I'll look at the stars
spread like diamonds
across a vibrant sky,
then take your hand
and make a deal:
Trust me
with the currency
of your truth.
I will guard it closely
to my heart,
11 comments:
Beautiful, and rather powerful...
September 15, 2013 at 11:43 AMSmooth as silk with steel underneath. Love it!
September 15, 2013 at 12:51 PMIf only more females were smart enough. Then his generic lines wouldn't work at all, and maybe he'd get the hint.
September 15, 2013 at 2:00 PMThat second stanza contains a truth. You express it exceedingly well.
September 15, 2013 at 2:37 PMI like the ending under the expanse of the night sky.
Like the story your poem tells and its powerful ending. Great wordle.
September 15, 2013 at 4:01 PMPowerful! I like the story you tell.
September 15, 2013 at 4:20 PMThis is a beautiful tale but still I feel that hurt is on its way. However for us observers it is a stunning read
September 15, 2013 at 9:05 PMThe violet evening softens the weight of this trade..as others say a beautiful blend of strength and thoughtful tender..
September 16, 2013 at 8:20 AMespecially loved the last stanza..
September 16, 2013 at 10:09 AMbeautifully written
The common language of commerce makes the esoteric so much more powerful.
September 16, 2013 at 12:07 PMAmen Sister! Especially dig “…but if on some violet evening you have a change of heart…” Practically edible, that!
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