A craving only one thing could satisfy.
Miles from nowhere, he despaired of finding
the object of desire that would fill his inner need.
And then he saw it.
Nirvana!
He slumped in the booth and soon saw before him
(hot and bubbling)
the freshly baked pie of his dreams.
About Friday Flash 55: The challenge is to write a complete story in fifty-five words. If you've written a 55-flash, go let The G-Man know!
9 comments:
ANN!!!!!
February 23, 2012 at 11:01 PMWhat Kind was it?
Loved your 55 My Friend
You are such a Pie Tease.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
Reminds me of chanting "cheese cake" while on a camping trip once, and finding it at a vegetarian diner in a hick town.
February 23, 2012 at 11:20 PMI thought this was going dark and then I saw the pie! Yummy read with great pics!
February 24, 2012 at 6:25 AMhow did you know i dream of pie? ha....that looks really good....mmm...mine would def be a fruit pie of some sort...
February 24, 2012 at 7:00 AMNice story that lead me by the nose.
February 24, 2012 at 3:37 PMThat made me hungry.
February 24, 2012 at 5:31 PM55 Flash Fiction Friday: I’m Latee
Darn, my mouth is watering. Those pies look so good. Tasty 55!
February 24, 2012 at 8:26 PMFun read, mmmm.
March 1, 2012 at 6:01 PMSometimes it only takes a little to make a day perfect.
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