to covet each doll you see.
(Different!)
(New!)
You scheme until you have her.
You enjoy her for awhile and show her off.
Then you put her with the others;
one more dolly on a shelf.
Are you off to collect another?
It's a most unworthy hobby for a man.
About Friday Flash 55: The challenge is to write a complete story in fifty-five words. If you've written a 55-flash, go let The G-Man know!
5 comments:
It sure is! Both the literal meaning and the metaphor. Great 55.
February 17, 2012 at 4:21 AMSounds like a Stephen King Novel!
February 17, 2012 at 8:09 AMLoved your 55 Queen Ann
You Rock!
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
heh...nice bit of social commentary that....some men yes....nice
February 17, 2012 at 9:12 AMChilling, how this can be taken.
February 17, 2012 at 10:30 AMSharp write! Love this 55.
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