He peeked inside the cabin and was daunted at what he saw. Nothing had prepared him for this adventure. The responsibility was enormous, but in spite of the ripped vinyl, rusted valves and antiquated displays, he felt up to the challenge. Gingerly, he took his seat.
Only he would be responsible for what happened next.
About Friday Flash 55: The challenge is to write a complete story in fifty-five words. If you've written a 55-flash, go let The G-Man know!
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even a sticker to remind you...but true...any time we get behind the wheel...
December 30, 2011 at 6:49 AMAnn...
December 30, 2011 at 8:38 AMI just LOVE reading 55's that are what they are supposed to be...
FLASH FICTION!!
Loved your 55 My Friend
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass New Year
Is that a train? Maybe Coyote is behind the wheel?
December 30, 2011 at 2:56 PM@Alice: Yes, it's the inside of a train. Dan and I went to the Galveston Railroad Museum on Wednesday. They suffered a lot of damage from the 2008 hurricane, so it was a bittersweet visit.
December 30, 2011 at 3:39 PMGalveston Railroad Museum
Oh! You left us hanging! I love it! Hopefully, we'll find out what exact challenge he is up for :)
December 30, 2011 at 4:40 PMand I wonder where he shall lead...
December 30, 2011 at 7:00 PMI like how your flash fiction left me wanting to know more!
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