As if reading her mind, the old man next to her said, "You don't have to do it, Miss."
"Oh yes I do."
About Friday Flash 55: The challenge is to write a complete story in fifty-five words. If you've written a 55-flash, go let The G-Man know!
55 - Departure
In Friday Flash 55
She gazed out the window at the tarmac. Was this really necessary, and did it have to be today? Was it too late to go back, admit her guilt and start afresh?
As if reading her mind, the old man next to her said, "You don't have to do it, Miss."
"Oh yes I do."
About Friday Flash 55: The challenge is to write a complete story in fifty-five words. If you've written a 55-flash, go let The G-Man know!
As if reading her mind, the old man next to her said, "You don't have to do it, Miss."
"Oh yes I do."
About Friday Flash 55: The challenge is to write a complete story in fifty-five words. If you've written a 55-flash, go let The G-Man know!
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9 comments:
Love this. Makes me want to know more.
November 4, 2011 at 2:21 AMAnn...
November 4, 2011 at 6:07 AMWhat a mysterious story.
And thats the beauty of some 55's,
they leave you wanting a bit more!
Excellent job.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
Like the first comment I'd like to know more. Reads like a blurb on the back of a novel. So get writing the book!
November 4, 2011 at 7:01 AMJamie
nice....of course you leave us with lots of questions but really well written...
November 4, 2011 at 7:21 AMLove it when we are left ot fill in the blanks. Nicely done.
November 4, 2011 at 4:47 PMI definitely want to know more! Good one.
November 4, 2011 at 5:55 PMA lovely departure from the expected. Has me wondering.
November 4, 2011 at 7:03 PMprofound 55.
November 4, 2011 at 10:03 PMyou truly entertain and make us think.
:)
Intriguing little snippet. Makes me want to know a lot more.
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