They tried to build a jail for me,
but instead, I built my own
with walls of futile wishes,
crazy dreams,
and childhood fears:
hard as diamonds
tough as nails.
No need for stone and steel
No need for stone and steel
when secrets will do.
Here I'm safe from
shadows and sunshine,
Here I'm safe from
shadows and sunshine,
strangers and fairy tales.
Inside these walls I'm safe
Inside these walls I'm safe
from me
and you.
But though I make my gaol
and imprison myself inside,
I am no martyr.
Prophets may forecast my fate
and seers speak my doom,
yet here there is no jailer
and in my pocket is a key.
So still your mocking laughter
and be not proud,
for I have seen the place you dwell.
You are locked up, too.
You are locked up, too.
This was written for The Sunday Whirl.
11 comments:
You had me at the first two lines.....so very powerful. Exceptionally well written :-)
October 19, 2014 at 1:38 AMThere is something so satisfying to walk the less traveled road.
October 19, 2014 at 3:45 AMWe always tend to hold the key to our own prison..now I understand your puzzle a little more..and yes...brilliant last line..a place of being to aspire to
October 19, 2014 at 4:26 AMEnjoyed the journey with you.
October 19, 2014 at 5:15 AMThe toughest jails are the ones we build ourselves.
October 19, 2014 at 5:42 AMAbsolutely beautiful and powerful from first line to last
October 19, 2014 at 6:42 AMWow! I lived every line…and especially the end.
October 19, 2014 at 8:43 AMExcellent. You managed to write a deeply meaningful powm from these disconnected words.
October 19, 2014 at 9:56 AMNow that's got me thinking!
October 19, 2014 at 12:14 PMGreat wordleing with a punch .. bravo.
October 20, 2014 at 12:26 AMWe call the ones who aren't locked up "crazy".
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