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55 - Pita

I watched them travel down the rack
So tempting…should I get a pack?
If I took them home to make a snack,
Surely someone would give me flack.
Bread is fattening – take them back!
No gluten permitted in this shack!
So I’ll buy some lettuce; stay on track
But someday soon I’ll buy a sack!











About Friday Flash 55: The challenge is to write a complete story in fifty-five words. If you've written a 55-flash, go let The G-Man know!

7 comments:

Alice Audrey said...

I pray I never have to do without. Bread is the base of my food pyramid.

October 11, 2012 at 10:31 PM
Brian Miller said...

are those donuts? my wife loves going to the donut factory and watching them come down the rack...ah wait its pita...bread is def a staple for us as well...

October 12, 2012 at 5:37 AM
izzy said...

Ooooh I love pita and all the other pocket breads! Yes I can use lettuce
but I don't want to give up dough!
Thanks-

October 12, 2012 at 7:42 AM
G-Man said...

Ann...
On the 55's you have a wonderful Knack.
When given the challenge you always Attack
I love Pita's, I buy them by the Stack!
Loved your Rhyme Time 55
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

October 12, 2012 at 8:44 AM
Susan Helene Gottfried said...

What happened to everything in moderation?

October 12, 2012 at 9:45 AM
˙·٠•●❤Sh@KiR@ ❤●•٠·˙ said...

I know that bread is not good for you but I love them . Pita...hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm....the only way to make a healthy one is to put a lot of lettuce...hmmmmmmmmmm...great 55!Mine is here
Have you a ROCKING AND BLESSED WEEKEND!!!
hugs
shakira

October 13, 2012 at 8:11 AM
Yvonne Osborne said...

I love bread, especially pitas! Fun rhyme. Yummy photo.

October 14, 2012 at 6:46 AM