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55 - Tantalized

With patience and a flashlight, he could see through the cracks around the door, but couldn't make out what was inside.

Stored treasures from days gone by?

Molding evidence of some gruesome crime?

It was probably just dusty garden tools, but he had finally found the key and would now know once and for all!













About Friday Flash 55: The challenge is to write a complete story in fifty-five words. If you've written a 55-flash, go let The G-Man know!

8 comments:

G-Man said...

At first it reminded me if King Tut
Then of Geraldo opening up Al Capones basement.
Loved your 55
Thanks for playing, This was a perfect example of Flash Fiction 55
Have a Kick Ass Week-End

August 16, 2012 at 9:54 PM
Brian Miller said...

or you could just kick the door in...or pick the lock..its not too hard if you know what you are doing...smiles.

August 16, 2012 at 10:17 PM
Alice Audrey said...

I suspect it is going to take more than the key to get that lock open. Maybe a chisel and hammer?

August 16, 2012 at 10:53 PM
Heaven said...

Nice suspenseful ending ~ I like to believe its stored treasures though ~

August 17, 2012 at 6:13 AM
izzy said...

What fun! looking through cracks is a great pastime! thanks

August 17, 2012 at 6:50 AM
hope said...

So, will there be a follow up next week or shall we stay on the edge of our seats til we fall off? ;)

August 17, 2012 at 8:39 AM
˙·٠•●❤Sh@KiR@ ❤●•٠·˙ said...

Ah..the suspense....hope he find gold instead of some other stuffs like a skull. Aiks. Wonderful 55!
Mine is here
Have you a ROCKING WEEKEND!!!
hugs
shakira

August 17, 2012 at 1:38 PM
PattiKen said...

Nice suspense. There's more story here. Maybe a serial 55?

August 17, 2012 at 6:07 PM