tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post989092890617480654..comments2023-04-15T09:56:07.099-05:00Comments on Ann Pino<p>Fiction Writer</p>: Messenger: An Excerpt from Bella DianaAnn (bunnygirl)http://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-7550975962238709032011-04-05T09:17:05.742-05:002011-04-05T09:17:05.742-05:00Lots going on here. I'm going to go read the w...Lots going on here. I'm going to go read the whole thing now.Susan Helene Gottfriedhttp://westofmars.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-76715730258176861182011-04-04T15:04:47.510-05:002011-04-04T15:04:47.510-05:00It'll only be right for her if she can regain ...It'll only be right for her if she can regain Mother later on.Alice Audreyhttp://www.aliceaudrey.com/?page_id=4029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-66514697120750531352011-04-04T06:51:41.422-05:002011-04-04T06:51:41.422-05:00'Everything happened'..this line sang out....'Everything happened'..this line sang out..you have such a clear and authoritative voice..your language is crisp and sparing and yet there is a great richness in the world and charcters you have created..a fine story that stands on it's own feet perfectly..JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-69855112310120785052011-04-04T05:21:41.455-05:002011-04-04T05:21:41.455-05:00This is beautifully written. Every detail is clear...This is beautifully written. Every detail is clear and the emotions are transparent. A really good read.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.com